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Heroes Elite

Started by Charmed, February 17, 2007, 06:36:00 AM

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Charmed

In the year 2019, most mutants have been killed. People don't understand them. In 2015, a law was passed giving humans a right to kill anything outside their species. But there are still those cases... the ones that can't be explained. Like in 2018, some girl was pushed off a building. Amazingly, she was unaffected. When asked about it, she said a "piolet without a plane" saved her. And in 2016, some kids were fooling in the deserted subway tunnels when one of them accidently activated one of the old trains. 5 kids would have died but they claim to have been saved when a "purple glow" lifted the from the tracks just before the train passed. And in 2020, a team was formed. A team to show the world that mutants are just like them...

The Heroes



Name: Chris Notte

Alias: Piolet

Age: 21

Appearance: Blonde hair, brown eyes, 6'4, (Review Picture).

Powers: Chris has the power of air manipulation, allowing him to even make himself fly.

Location: Apartment building in New York

Allies: Other Heroes Elite members




Name: Xenio

Alias: Xenio

Age: Unknown

Powers: Xenio has the abilities of telepathy and telekinesis. His intellegence is also off the charts.

Location: The Abonded Subways of New York

Allies: Other Heroes Elite members




Name: Sandra Solair

Alias: Lady Solair

Age: 29

Powers: Sandra has complete and total mastery over fire and light.

Location: Her father's mansion.

Allies: Father, Heroes Elite




Name: John McLaughlin

Alias: Arduous

Age: 19

Powers: John can control and meld with rock along with being super strong.

Location: A farm just outside New York City

Allies: Heroes Elite

Captain Pluto

cool work on microheroes

UnkoMan

Yeah, these guys look pretty neat. I like toned down use of colours, and love Pilot's (non)costume. I assume his name is Pilot due to his costume/powers, and since a piolet is one of those things ice climbers use.
Actually, I like the non-costume costumeness of Xenio too.

My only complaint is that Lady Solair's head is shaped a bit weird to me. Sort of skull like? I assume this is the fault of whatever base you used... unless you made your own base.

Still, nice work. I wouldn't mind seeing more from this world.

Uncle Yuan

Cool stuff!  But could you change the color of the yellow text - I can't read it at all on my screen.

Charmed

Quote from: Captain Pluto on February 18, 2007, 10:46:41 PM
cool work on microheroes

Thanks!

Quote from: UnkoMan on February 18, 2007, 11:29:01 PM
Yeah, these guys look pretty neat. I like toned down use of colours, and love Pilot's (non)costume. I assume his name is Pilot due to his costume/powers, and since a piolet is one of those things ice climbers use.
Actually, I like the non-costume costumeness of Xenio too.

My only complaint is that Lady Solair's head is shaped a bit weird to me. Sort of skull like? I assume this is the fault of whatever base you used... unless you made your own base.

Still, nice work. I wouldn't mind seeing more from this world.

Thanks! Yeah, I'm definately going to revise her hair.

Quote from: Uncle Yuan on February 19, 2007, 06:56:02 AM
Cool stuff!  But could you change the color of the yellow text - I can't read it at all on my screen.

Thanks and sure thing, I changed it to orange. I tried making the text color fit with them i.e. Piolet=Blue (Air), Xenio=Green (Skin), Lady Solair=Yellow (Sun/Fire), Arduous=Brown (Earth)

Up next will be villians and I'am considering doing a side project.

Charmed

Can one of the staff please move this to alternate avatars please?