boredom is boring

[nickyfig]

he walked down the hall and said to himself "im bored" "well boredom is boring" and a strange old wrinkly man popped out of no where and said "no duh" and the boys face brightened up and he said "wow im not bored any more" "old men are cool!" :D

[ow_tiobe_sb]

a strange old wrinkly man popped out of no where and said "no duh" and the boys face brightened up and he said "wow im not bored any more" "old men with candy and a lascivious look are cool!" :D

Fixed.  ^_^

ow_tiobe_sb
Phantom Bunburyist and The Prat in the Hat

[MJB]

he walked down the hall and said to himself "im bored" "well boredom is boring" and a strange old wrinkly man popped out of no where and said "no duh" and the boys face whithered and the boy said "old wrinkly men are weird!".

Double fixed! :)

[nickyfig]

he walked down the hall and said to himself "im bored" "well boredom is boring" and a strange old wrinkly man popped out of no where and said "no duh" and the boys face whithered and the boy said "old wrinkly men are losers!".

Double fixed! :)

         Triple fixed! :thumbup:

[Reepicheep]

he walked down the hall and said to himself "im bored" "well boredom is boring" and a strange old wrinkly man popped out of no where and said "no duh" and the boys face exploded and the boy said "she sells sea shells down by the sea shore".

Double fixed! :)

         Triple fixed! :thumbup:

Multi-fixed!

[nickyfig]

i think my story was the best! it was original! hehehehehe any way so yeah :thumbup: