Ink's art block-new x-men

[Xenolith]

I still do my best work with a uni-ball.  'course, I do cartoon stuff, so its not a big deal. 

[ink]

uni jimmies are expensive

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tried to up the danger level a little

[Gremlin]

Looks more dynamic. I freaking love it, Ink.

[PreRaphaelite]

I especially like the 'stop' sign held in the background. Nice touch. (I enjoy specific details)

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[Reepicheep]

consistently brilliant!!!

[MJB]

IMO if you had slightly twisted the knife in the figures left hand (HIS left) it would have produced a better image. This would have made the left (readers right) knife appear at a sharper angle thus differentiating it from the knife in the right (readers left) hand.

Stage directions are hard...

[ink]

Anole ,Dust and Pixie



Mercury v01 ink and Mercury v02


Trance  DJ and Jullian



I wanted to simplfy my line and play with shilloute. Some places it worked and some places it didn't. If your curious  about dj lol

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/DJ_(comics)



Thanks Mjb, knives in hands still bug me till this day.

[Podmark]

Those are awesome Ink. Some of my favorite characters too.

[Gremlin]

I am speechless. These are PHENOMENAL.

[ink]

man i like anole's old head and hood better. Dammit, glad i scanned in my roughs so i can refer back. Animated style and look is surprisingly harder cause i can't fall back on over rendered lines. I thnk this is a good exercise for me!

[Gremlin]

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I'm sorry, I seem to have made a mess. I'm drooling all over the place.

[ink]

I want to up the tentacle count . Here's the clean line version. was thinking how cool if omega red smash through the new x-men. He be the perfect scary villian for the kids.  Mercury would probably beat him though lol

[ink]

revised lineart ....i guess i wasn't done with line art and now trying to kill off these flats.

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[Outcast]

   

It looks incredible Ink.

[Reepicheep]

Wow! That is just immense, Ink!

Amazing work!

[AfghanAnt]

Amazing work as always Ink.

[ink]

some faces are wonky like jet girl and maul and warblade.

tron lady looks a little big , but any other crits would be great! I am in need of turning this in asap.

[Xenolith]

The perspective on the scoreboard might be a little wonky.
The big guy on the left - not sure where his right and left feet are?  Are they beyond the horizon?  He looks like he might be crawling out of a hole.
Both ladies on the right - Do they have left arms?  It doesn't look bad as is, and I'm assuming you want the viewer to think they are behind the bodies, rather than an oversight.
Can't really find any serious issues. 
This is a really professional looking piece so far.  I like seeing the heavier pencils approach.
Very nice.

[ink]

[Blkcasanova247]

WildC.A.T.S....very cool!

[ink]

[Uncle Yuan]

Cool stuff, as always.  My only critique here is anatomical - her torso is way too long.  Drop the point of her top down to right above her navel and it would be about right. 

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[Xenolith]

Really nice, Ink.  That's something I'd like to read.  You are improving by leaps and bounds, and you were already very good.  The marguee is really nice (but her name is mispelled) and the theatre with orchestral pit is really nice.  Clayface is very well done and very compelling.

Out of curiosity, how do you ink?  Pen and ink or a computer program?

Thanks.

[ink]

heh i ink my pen and ink ....than retouch with the comp.

I'll post my updated version.

and i knew about the name being mispelled too late. I think i am going to leave cause i feel like an editor wont care.

I'll just say it's earth 23 ...the ZANTANNA lol

[ink]

so this page is an iffy page. But this is the closer.
It gets rather dark and moody for some reason and the anatomy on the last panel was killing me last night. I'm going to stab at again now that i have had sleep but i figure it be cool to get some crits in.

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[MJB]

Dude. Why they hell aren't you working for Marvel and DC? Those pages are phenomenal. Keep it up.